Zombie's Eliminatrix

[cyber99]

I have a brand new Deck, plz rate and fix.
Special Summons:
1x Vampire Genesis
Fusions:
1x Reaper on the Nightmare
2 Tributes:
1x Despair from the Dark
1 Tribute:
1x Patrician of Darkness
1x Dark Dust Spirit
2x Vampire Lord
2x Ryu Kokki
Non-Tributes:
1x Royal Keeper
1x Wandering Mummy
1x Fear from the Dark
1x Castle of Dark Illusions
1x Tsukuyomi
1x Dark Jeroid
2x Pyramid Turtle
2x Regenerating Mummy
2x Soul-Absorbing Bone Towers
Spells:
1x Premature Burial
1x Giant Trunade
1x The Dark Door
1x Reload
1x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Card of Safe Return
1x Mask of the Accursed
1x Dark Hole
1x Metamorphosis
2x Call of the Mummy
2x Book of Life
Traps:
1x Curse of Royal
1x Bottomless Trap Hole
1x Horn of Heaven
1x Dust Tornado
1x Ordeal of a Traveler
2x Tutan Mask

[whatah]

way to many tributes, let me suggest a few changes:

Monsters:

Vampire Lord x2
Injection Fairy Lily
Pyramid Turtle x3
Breaker The Magical Warrior
Spirit Reaper x3
Mystic Tomato x2
Sangan
Morphing Jar
D. D. Warrior Lady
Magician Of Faith
Newdoria x2

Spells:

Scapegoat
Heavy Storm
Creature Swap x2
Dark Hole
Nobleman Of Crossout
Smashing Ground
Confiscation
Premature Burial
Book Of Life x2
Book Of Moon
Snatch Steal
Swords Of Revealing Light
Mystical Space Typhoon

Traps:

Bottomless Trap Hole
Sakuretsu Armor x2
Torrential Tribute
Dust Tornado x2
Call of the Haunted


a few explainations:

pyramid turtle is a 3 of in the deck, it is the most important card. it combos with creature swap to give you massive advantage.

the deck is easy to assemble, Lily, Morphing jar, DDWL, Breaker are pretty much the only cards in the deck worth more than $2, breaker is coming out in MC2 in 2 weeks, DDWL is a common in the warrior deck coming out in 3 weeks, times are good

the tomato can get itself, newdoria, sangan, or reaper
giant rat can get itself, turtle or lilly
turtle can get reaper or v-lord

the deck runs extremely smoothly and is a great choice for a medium level metagame but the dominance of DDAssailants and Cyber dragons in most competitive areas is bad news to zombie decks, if you run into many cyber dragons you might want to cut down to two reapers and run 1 Ryu Kokki


good luck